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| allison811 发表于 2010-12-17 09:41 只看TA 244楼 |
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| I am looking forward to the next chapter. Unlike others, I think this story has more restriction than it usually are because one person can only be hypnothese once. The point that I am trying to make is that the boy should think of a bigger plan before he do this. I know that it is difficult to think normally but he only got one chance, he should use it in a better way. |
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| savior8911 发表于 2010-12-18 00:59 只看TA 247楼 |
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 写的不错，期待下一部的问世！
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| perfectyan 发表于 2011-2-4 16:33 只看TA 250楼 |
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| 不错，催眠题材的，不过里面的日本名字不喜欢…… |
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